Suzy’s POV:
It hurts !
I can’t think clearly…
It hurts so much…
But I can’t even scream.
I can’t move at all. It’s like I’m paralysed.
But it hurts.
It hurts so much…
Why does it hurt ?
It shouldn’t.
I had my shields up.
All of them.
I should be okay.
How did it get past my shields ?
It hurts !
I’m… becoming dizzy…
Was I poisoned ?
I feel sleepy…
I can’t sleep…
One-sama’s shields are… weaker… than mine…
I have to… help… her…
If it got past mine… she has no chance…
I have to buy… them… some time…
I…
Too… late… ?
The soldier… he’s…
…
It’s… my fault…
We… shouldn’t… be… here…
I have… to… buy…
Time…
Can’t… move…
Aby…
Don’t die…
Please…
Go away…
Don’t…
What ?
What… was… that?
O…Onee-sama?
I've reincarnated, but I'm a Girl! Wait, am I not even Human? 
SWAG
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❤
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Abigaelle Lovecraft Redtear… Race – Vampire, Demon(Succubus; Oni)
*looks at Oni yōkai, imagines Abigaelle turning the attacker into her new leather wardrobe.*
Oni are known for being incredibly strong, while Succubi are known for being very beautiful. Abigaelle being both will mean she might grow into a She-Hulk ripoff (I’m not complaining).
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I only saw She-Hulk once when I was a kid on Justice League, so I don’t really know anything about her x)
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She Hulk is one of the prime examples of “Amazon beauty”
TV tropes to the rescue
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/AmazonianBeauty
In short a blend of beauty and brawn that depicts the woman as a powerful yet beautiful figure. Yes this is tricky to pull off (American Gladiators is a good example of IRL) and taste depends on the viewer but it is basically a hot Hercules sister.
Though going by the shock and the audio you used, the Amazon beauty I want will be frightening.
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Well…
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Justice League?
I think She-Hulk is supposed to be from Marvel (simply because Hulk is from Marvel) and I think the Justice League is from someone else (don’t remember who).
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(Well then it wasn’t there XD)
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Isn’t she an eternal loli though
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Yup ^^
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I actually hadn’t seen the chapter when I looked before -_-”
Well, I don’t have school monday morning so who cares :p
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“CHAPTER 18.5: O… ONEE-SAMA?”
…
Shit, it’s bad
Extremely bad.
Please, don’t tell me it’s Suzy’s POV of the attack.
Please 😥
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“It hurts !”
Shit
Shit
Shit
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“It’s like I’m paralised.”
-> paralyzed
I have an extremely bad feeling in my stomach…
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“We… shoudln’t… be… here…”
-> shouldn’t
It hurts inside my heart 😥
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That beast scream…
Was that Abby?
Did she activate her demon form?
If so then…
Blood will rain.
…
Wait, it was already raining blood…
Man, my heart hurts…
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Thanks for the chapter
Why?
Why would you even make such a POV?
For another cliffhanger?
To make us suffer?
I hate you for that.
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X)
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Read the first line :p
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Gomen nasai ;p
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Maybe you’re ill?
You should call a doctor then!
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Quick! Call an ambulance!
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It’s raining blood!
Hallelujah! It’s raining blood!
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Love you too ❤
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You’re a monster, you know that?
Well, that’s a compliment coming from me :p
Well, I’ll wait for next month 😀
To see Abby going full psychopath 😀
To see Abby becoming a monster 😀
To see everything being dyed in red 😀
To see the beasts being hunted by a greater predator 😀
To see a mindless Abby killing and slaughtering 😀
To see everything be destroyed 😀
See you next month then 😀
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Thank you 😀
And see you next time :p
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O.O awesome!!!!!!!!!
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*T… Thank you!*
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